craigalan

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Score: 7
Skateboarding Fun

"It was pretty good."

submission: Skateboarding Fun
date: August 28, 2007

The graphics need work you need to animate the guy,at times it seemed alittle slow,and the background was just white. The sound fit with the skateboarding.
The flash overall was pretty good i liked ho it nda had te skateboard transform kinda gave it alittle more style. My sugestions are add like a background, fix the speed,and make the guy into a real person but overall it was pretty good especially for a first.
Questions: Will you be making more of these? If you do you should throw in a bit of a story like the skaters name,maybe others skaters he skates with,and like maybe a skating competition.

February 17, 2008

Author's Response:

Thanks for the tips, just to let you know, at first, I tried making a real person at first, but it sucked, and this guy was quick and easy, also, I tried making a background, but it sucked, so I got rid of it, plus, the next one will be really fast, hardcore skating. This is going to be a series, but right now, it's all basic stuff, huge things will come later, like once I get Swift 3D, say hello to uberness, anyways, no more on the future! I can't give it all away!

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Score: 8
Happy B-day Flash Lounge!

"Lol that was strange."

date: August 28, 2007

The graphics were alittle eh not bad but not great just not too much moving. The humor was outstanding louis giving birth like that and just everything was oustanding. The narrators voice was perfect he must be a great voice actor. My only suggestion is you should make them move more and what not but other than that it was overall pretty funny and a great tribute to louis.

P.S. amazing ending that's what made me laugh the hardest besides naked pics of fat chicks :P.

August 28, 2007

Author's Response:

"Art, Animation, Script, and NARRACTION by Derek Vandenbeg"
I did the voice acting. Thanks. :)
Glad ya liked it. ^^

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Score: 8
DestructoTanks

"Pretty exciting."

submission: DestructoTanks
date: August 28, 2007

The graphics were pretty good i loved the explosion but i disliked the background.
The controls were pretty basic but yo need to make it more obvious if the turrets facing backwards or frwards can get confusing. I loved the sound and explosions.
My only suggestions are change up the backgrounds,bigger better tanks,owerups where you can inflict more damage,and there was a glitch when i died the barrier(that you can't destroy) disappeared i could still shoot at it but it wasn't there,

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Score: 9
Newgrounds BBS 2

"Amazing."

submission: Newgrounds BBS 2
date: August 24, 2007

The graphics were a lot bebter than the first one i liked the layout seemed more planned. The song was weird and fit perfectly made me laugh hard. The humor in the flash was very high. It was random and seemed more well thought out. This was a great sequal to a funny classic will there be a third or will you venture into uncharted territory? If you do a third you should probably do animated .gifs

August 25, 2007

Author's Response:

If I do I third it will be proper flash animations as opposed to just pictures.

IF I do a third.

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Score: 9
Schwarzkäppchen

"Very good story but decent game."

submission: Schwarzkäppchen
date: August 24, 2007

The graphics were amazing in the story but also in the game too i loved when you killed the creatures. The story was really good the big bad wolf scared me lol. The game was alittle repetative and you sLiced dowNwards with the blunt part not the blade. You need to add combos,add the ability to jump,diferent backgrounds,kinda fix the strange walking,and make storys with each game it was great.

August 24, 2007

Author's Response:

Haha Thank you for those suggestions.
If I make a second game like this I will certainly make it more diverse and less boring.
1 attack can get tedious I know, but the point was to have one hit kills because it was a quick assignment I did within 3 months.

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Score: 9
Ida's Luck Part 2

"Increadibly beautiful."

submission: Ida's Luck Part 2
date: August 24, 2007

The graphics were outstanding the eery darkness was perfect for the movie. The story was outstanding and original perfect narrating. The flash was a beautiful masterpiece. Is there going to be another? My only problem was the narrators voice lacked emotion when some parts neded alittle plus her song was hard to understand. But it was overall very great.

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Score: 7
Burger Run

"This was fun."

submission: Burger Run
date: August 24, 2007

The graphics were old school and i liked them brought you back in the day. The mop and broom were good looking although the background just stayed overall the same you should add more colorful and changing envionments(restaraunts). The sound was pretty good i liked when you ate stuff, got hit,and nice background music. Although i think you shoulda added more of a restaraunt type music. The gameplay was pretty fun but also pretty easy after like ten seconds of watching them you know the paths they take. You should make the paths they take more random and cut the speed alittle if you do that. Plus adding difficulties,more types of enemies,and alittle more animated backgrounds this would be and still is a pretty good time killer.

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Score: 6
GameBp strip hangman 2

"Eh it was ok."

date: August 24, 2007

The graphics weren't that great i reccomend animating the stick figure. The concept of the game was straight forward but you should add like a clue lie animal,place,name,and etc. Plus there's no sound you need to add like...porno music lol. The game's not much fun just hangman,porn,ad no sound. You need sound,more animation,background changing, and just small touches like sounds when you get it right or wrong.

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Score: 7
Brain Bender

"The title's true."

submission: Brain Bender
date: August 23, 2007

The graphics were ok not much there but the background made it harder and fit perfectly. The concept was original and it was a very difficult game. The flash itself was cool a brain teaser and i got the point whenever it said it i tried doing what it told me but it got very complicating lol. The only thing i could say to add would be like lives and like a survival mode. Well plus diferent difficulties.

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Score: 9
PandaDog Episode 04

"Outstanding."

date: August 23, 2007

The graphics were amazing i loved it the shark looked awesome. You never go lazy on the graphics which is great. The sea and everything was beautiful a masterpiece for the eyes. The story's are always original and different. You've got a great series on the way. One suggestion though you should start kinda putting a story or will this always just be random humor?

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