It was pretty good.
The graphics need work you need to animate the guy,at times it seemed alittle slow,and the background was just white. The sound fit with the skateboarding.
The flash overall was pretty good i liked ho it nda had te skateboard transform kinda gave it alittle more style. My sugestions are add like a background, fix the speed,and make the guy into a real person but overall it was pretty good especially for a first.
Questions: Will you be making more of these? If you do you should throw in a bit of a story like the skaters name,maybe others skaters he skates with,and like maybe a skating competition.
Thanks for the tips, just to let you know, at first, I tried making a real person at first, but it sucked, and this guy was quick and easy, also, I tried making a background, but it sucked, so I got rid of it, plus, the next one will be really fast, hardcore skating. This is going to be a series, but right now, it's all basic stuff, huge things will come later, like once I get Swift 3D, say hello to uberness, anyways, no more on the future! I can't give it all away!
Lol that was strange.
The graphics were alittle eh not bad but not great just not too much moving. The humor was outstanding louis giving birth like that and just everything was oustanding. The narrators voice was perfect he must be a great voice actor. My only suggestion is you should make them move more and what not but other than that it was overall pretty funny and a great tribute to louis.
P.S. amazing ending that's what made me laugh the hardest besides naked pics of fat chicks :P.
"Art, Animation, Script, and NARRACTION by Derek Vandenbeg"
I did the voice acting. Thanks. :)
Glad ya liked it. ^^
The graphics were outstanding the eery darkness was perfect for the movie. The story was outstanding and original perfect narrating. The flash was a beautiful masterpiece. Is there going to be another? My only problem was the narrators voice lacked emotion when some parts neded alittle plus her song was hard to understand. But it was overall very great.
The graphics were amazing i loved it the shark looked awesome. You never go lazy on the graphics which is great. The sea and everything was beautiful a masterpiece for the eyes. The story's are always original and different. You've got a great series on the way. One suggestion though you should start kinda putting a story or will this always just be random humor?
Actually pretty good experiment.
The graphics weren't bad but not great the walking at the begining was alittle funky but when the fight started it seemed a lot etter. Guess that's why this was an experiment. The sound fit perfectly with the action although you shoulda added noises when he killed them and screams. If you pursue this flash and make a series you should Add like a prequel or two before he become a killer like show him before he was psycho then why he went psycho. Then you can have tons of killing rampage but add a slight story or goal. I believe with harwork this could become popular you've got the fighting down good just add noises and stuff plus fix the walking.
Remarks-Prety short but itwas intended on being on the Bytesize.
Graphics-The faces looked alittle weird but it was overall pretty good.
Humor-I thought it was pretty funny and should be on the Bytesize.
Comments-This is easily good enough to be on it i hope it makes it it's random and funny and that's what's on Bytesize.
I was hoping it would make it too even if it's done in my old style now.
I made a new Windows Live email address to send it in because my normal hotmail one wouldn't work. Oh well, like I said it ain't a big deal. I'm confident that I'll get a front page or award winning toon sometime in the future.
Wow that was strange.
Graphics-Weren't bad the walking was good d i likedthe background.
Humor-That was so crazy and strange lol that dog was nuts made me laugh so hard.
Sounds-Alittle low and hard to hear.
Flash-Pretty good and random made me laugh a lot you should make more of these it was pretty good.
Ha pretty amusing
Graphics-Looked pretty good i can't wait to see more i liked the way the stick figure looked tweeked out made me laugh.
Sounds-Pretty good and random songs.
Humor-andom,funny songs,and pretty good chuckle.strange ending.
Pretty good but pretty short.
Graphics-Just sprites but you used them well.
Flash-Was far to short but looks pretty cool.
Sounds-I liked the hee haw huh or whatever they were kinda funny.
Overall-Good but far too short you should make a story about this. Like have megaman fight gangs on the subway that'll be a new kinda of story. Just make it longer and it was kinda funny with the "damn gangs"
It was a good start.
Remarks-I kinda disliked the voices but i guess you were kinda mking it funny i worked alittle i liked the story seems pretty good.
Graphics-Not too bad i lied them they were south park canadianish which was kinda funny.
Humor-Kinda funny with the way they looked,newspaper,city name,and baby news.
Flash-Looks like a start of a good series it was alittle short but not too bad you just need to kinda fix the voices that'll get annoying after a while.
Story-Pretty funny and looks cool.
Comment-The little dressup game in it was a nice touch but you sould add a few more items die hard fans would totally love that if you plan on pursuing the flash series.
Thanks, I was kinda desperate for sounds since my mic crapped out on me part way through.
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